One thing about my writing career that has always frustrated me, and that I cannot seem to train myself out of, is the fact that I get bored. It has happened every time I try to write one continuous story, usually around the ten-thousand word mark. When I was actually trying to write a novel I would press on after that, but often when it hit that point it became a chore, something that writing should never be. “Only write what you love” is advice I get a lot. So I adhere to it.
It’s ended up creating this sort of bizarre paradox in my writing. My passion is worldbuilding. I love grabbing huge ideas and making societies out of them. “What would a culture of people with no eyes be like?” or “How could a people scared of the nighttime survive, and how would it shape their lives?” I end up with original cultures, nations, and religions in crazy fantasy settings. But those details are never fleshed out onto the page because I never get that far.
If it’s one thing I do, it’s write great Chapter One’s. I’m constantly writing short stories that sound like they are the first chapter in a novel. It’s because they are. But I don’t want to keep writing because I don’t want to stop liking that character and their story. Sometimes, I won’t even know what comes next.
This has been my plight. I know I can write great hooks. It’s all I do, for one thing, so I get a lot of practice in, but I don’t want to be a short story author. I want to be a novelist. In short stories, I can only tease at the societies and the worlds I’ve created. I never have time to flesh them out.
One of the big reasons why all of this is a big problem for me is because I’m actually really bad at both character and plot development. At least, I think I am. Plot is especially hard for me, because trying to piece one together has never felt good to me. It always feels fake, and I don’t know exactly why it seems so artificial. I’m better with characters, but I feel like I only have a few dozen, and the only thing that changes is their name as I put them in different settings.
I’ve tried outlining. I’ve made character sheets and framing the plot structure chapter by chapter. But taking any meaningful time to do that saps the enjoyment from the story, so when I do try to write a novel, most of the time I wing it, with the only preparation being a few loose ideas I have in my head. This is often called “discovery writing” in the community, but this also feels wrong to me. I have such a technical and organized mind. I like to plan. Except when it comes to writing.
None of it makes sense, so I stick to what I know. “Chapter One”.
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I have the same sort of issue. I write short stories all the time and they always start with a hook. I recently tried to start writing my own novel and it’s a mystery. I started discovery writing but somehow I felt that it was moving away from the mystery and I needed a plot. So I wrote one. After writing it, I started overthinking the draft so much that I wasn’t writing well. The plot was still in my head but I cut it out. I don’t force myself to write but write when I want to. Maybe you should try writing a short story, then stop whenever you want to and where you stop, start your outline. That way you’re already in your story but know where to go after too. If it bothers you cut it out but don’t throw it away.
That’s actually pretty close to what my current plan is for the “Spear Gate” stories. (You can search that as a tag to read them all.) They are individual stories, but I’ve started to think of them as successive chapters in a novel. A rewrite is on the way!
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That’s great! Will be sure to check them out!
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